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LANGUAGE & LITERATURE · ONE FEATURE, ONE PARAGRAPH

Close Analysis

One feature. One paragraph. Read closely, explain what a choice does, then revise the same response.

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01 / READ THE SOURCE

A gift for Dad

A domestic tourism advertisement presented as a gift suggestion. The complete advertisement is shown.

Tourism Australia, “Would Dad rather aftershave or an adventure?” (2020). ↗

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Tourism Australia, “Would Dad rather aftershave or an adventure?” (2020). Source page 1. A text version is available immediately below.
Read text / neutral visual description

Prepared from the supplied adapted source. Line wrapping differs from the image. Check visual details against the source above.

WOULD DAD RATHER AFTERSHAVE OR AN ADVENTURE? Australia, we’re living in the best gift shop in the world. To give the gift of an unforgettable travel experience, visit australia.com HOLIDAY here THIS YEAR Adelaide, South Australia AUSTRALIA Visual description (prepared for this pilot): Large cream-colored uppercase headline against a blue sky. Below it, smaller text and a campaign logo. The lower portion shows four people in safety harnesses on a stadium roof, with sunlight near the left edge. The location is printed at bottom left and the Australia logo at bottom right. This description records visible details; it does not supply an interpretation.
02 / ONE FEATURE, ONE PARAGRAPH

What is this choice doing?

Choose one feature. How does it address someone choosing a gift for Dad?

Aim for 80–150 words; a shorter, precise explanation is fine. Maximum: 180 words.

0 words · one paragraph

Check your own explanation
  • Can I point to the exact detail behind my claim?
  • Have I explained how the choice works, rather than only naming it?
  • Does the proposed effect fit this audience and context?

Revise this same paragraph. You decide which feedback is supported by the source.

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