Paper 1
Develop a close literary analysis of a previously unseen passage.
Develop an interpretation of an unseen literary text through close analysis of its choices. Let the guiding question give the response a manageable focus. Begin with the literal situation, then explore implications, tensions, and subtleties.
Develop a reading; do not try to solve the text. A poem or passage may sustain conflicting feelings or leave a question unanswered. Explain what the evidence establishes, what it suggests and what remains uncertain. A clear argument can account for ambiguity without making every interpretation equally convincing.
The companion uses Christina Rossetti’s “Up-Hill” throughout. Read the complete poem there, then follow the same details through Method, Avoid, Criteria and Models. The question and commentary are teaching examples, not an official IB paper.
Unpack the guiding question before selecting your evidence.
Writing an introduction: step-by-step guidance and a worked example
Read the context and question
Establish who speaks, what happens, and what the guiding question asks you to explore. Distinguish the speaker or narrator from the writer.
Identify only what the text or supplied context establishes. A first-person voice does not establish that the speaker shares the author’s gender, life story, beliefs or feelings. In drama, a character’s speech is not automatically the playwright’s position. In memoir, the narrator is presented as the author, but the voice looking back still selects and interprets the remembered experience.
Trace the text’s structure
Trace the text's movement. Notice changes in voice, tone, perspective, rhythm, setting, or argument; connect parts to the whole.
Select evidence
Choose precise details that develop a reading. Explain how language, form, and structure interact. A device matters because of what it does in this text.
Develop your argument
Form a thesis that answers the guiding question. Build paragraphs around interpretive claims, bringing several related choices together rather than touring devices.
Check your response
Test your argument against an awkward detail or a plausible alternative reading. Qualify claims the text cannot fully support. A subtle interpretation need not claim certainty about the writer’s intentions.
Separate a claim about the writing from a claim about its creator: “the poet places reassurance beside doubt” describes a textual choice; “the poet was grieving” requires biographical evidence. Prefer explaining what a choice enables us to understand over declaring the author’s private motive.
With a public-health leaflet from an identified institution such as the CDC, the organization’s role gives you a starting point for considering purpose and audience. Even there, test assumptions against the particular text. We often know less about a literary speaker from outside the text: do not invent a target demographic, personal history or single persuasive aim to fill that gap.
Need another way in?
For poetry, try TPCASTT. It supports initial reading; it does not prescribe an essay structure.
The Poetry guide connects voice, line and form to worked readings of “Up-Hill,” “The Paperweight” and “Caught.”
The Drama guide explains how to read dialogue, silence and stage directions, with a separate worked example from Andrew Bovell.
The Prose non-fiction guide covers memoir, biography, travel writing and essays, with a separate Fisher worked example.
The Prose fiction guide explores narrative perspective, character and structure, with a separate Moon Tiger worked example.
- Assuming the speaker's views are the poet's views.
- Treating symbols as having fixed meanings outside their context.
- Naming sound or structural features without explaining their effects.
- Inventing background information to resolve ambiguity.
- Forcing every detail into a reading that ignores contradictory evidence.
These practical explanations help you use the criteria while planning and revising. They do not replace the full rubric.
A · Understanding and interpretation
Move from accurate literal understanding to a supported reading of implications and subtleties.
What A looks like in Literature Paper 1: Your interpretation explains more than what happens. For example, you might show how a confident voice becomes uncertain, using details from both stages. Distinguish the writer from the speaker or narrator.
Check your work: What does my evidence allow me to infer, and where does the text complicate that inference?
B · Analysis and evaluation
Explain how choices create meaning, and develop why their effects matter to your interpretation.
What B looks for in Literature Paper 1: Explain how a particular choice supports your reading. If you notice a repeated question, examine its wording, where it returns, and how its meaning changes. Naming repetition alone does not explain its contribution.
Check your work: Have I connected the choice to meaning, then explained why it matters at this point in the text?
C · Focus and organization
Sustain a clear response to the question through connected ideas.
What C looks like in Literature Paper 1: Each paragraph should move the interpretation forward. A later paragraph might develop an earlier idea, examine a turning point, or test a first impression against the ending. Three points can work when their relationship is clear.
Check your work: Why does this paragraph follow the previous one, and what does it add to the argument?
D · Language
Express the reading with clarity, precision, and control.
What D looks like in Literature Paper 1: Use language that makes your reasoning easy to follow. Integrate short quotations into your sentences and use literary terms accurately. A clear explanation across two sentences is more useful than one crowded sentence.
Check your work: Can a reader follow the connection between my quotation and my claim without guessing?
Try the final exchange of “Up-Hill” in the workspace below. Keep your first reading, use the self-check, then revise. You can export either attempt without asking for AI feedback.
For a different text, use Passage Practice for a short unseen extract. First record a literal observation, then an inference, then the choice supporting that inference.
For a second attempt, examine a detail that complicates your first reading. Revise the claim rather than discarding inconvenient evidence.
From “me” to “all”
Write two or three sentences on the final question and answer. Explain how the wording develops the relationship between uncertainty and reassurance.
Will there be beds for me and all who seek?
Yea, beds for all who come.
Self-check before revising
- Have you explained the movement from an individual concern to a wider one?
- What does the answer repeat, and what wording changes?
- What earlier detail supports or qualifies your claim?
- Are you describing the assurance the reply offers, or assuming an emotion every reader must feel?
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Use these alongside the text. Select the prompts that help answer your question. Download the complete poem and practice question from the companion for offline work.
A route through the whole poem
- Opening: connect the uphill journey and the reply “my friend.” Difficulty is acknowledged alongside companionship.
- Middle: trace the fears of finding shelter and being admitted. Explain how the answers address those specific concerns.
- Ending: explore the widening from “me” to “all,” while accounting for the fatigue that remains.
This is an idea-led plan, not a requirement to write one paragraph per stanza. Each point needs precise choices and evidence.
A worked paragraph
The companion develops the middle point into an analytical paragraph. Read it first as a continuous argument, then open the commentary to see how the claim, evidence and evaluation connect.
A revision worth making
Too absolute: “The answers remove the speaker’s uncertainty.”
More defensible: “The answers repeatedly offer assurance, while the continuing questions preserve the speaker’s uncertainty.”
The second claim accounts for the whole exchange. It gives you more to explain, not less.